Thursday, 10 October 2013

Mrs D

I like the semiotics within your trailer and the storyline works. The heart beat and some SFX are effective. Editing is very limited and there are only long shots - this barely hits band 2 for construction. There is no variation of pace or camera shots. Break down the structure of some RMAs and revisit your storyboard. Hearing the audio would be good too.
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  1. Harry Dyson14 October 2013 at 01:42

    Thank you, we will have this hopefully sorted by around Tuesday next week.

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